Comments on: COCO 7

By: Coco

Coco — Wed, 14 Oct 2009 09:31:25 +0000

haha Dan I am happy you liked shitface. You know the look! Thank you too Renata!

JDEvolutionist I can promise you Ivana to would like to move beyond sleaze but we some times don’t get what it is we want

By: JDEvolutionist

JDEvolutionist — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 22:44:51 +0000

Coco you are still going strong and I fully expect to see you there for the next round but competition is hotting up and I think you need to take the story somewhere beyond the sleaze now and into a realm that will raise you game to that of being more combative with the ‘enemy’. Good luck Madame Coco.

By: Renata

Renata — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 21:37:01 +0000

Coco, I´ve been pretty busy lately, but I just want you to know I keep reading your story, and it is still my favorite!
Go Coco!!!

By: danpowell

danpowell — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 21:32:32 +0000

Each round this gets better and better. Love the description of Yiannis with a face like he shit himself. You also use the prompt really well. I so want to read this to the end.

By: Coco

Coco — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 16:06:30 +0000

Thank you Kaylie! (I never told to you before but I love your name. I never heard one like that). Maybe more conversation with Frank coming up in next round…

By: Coco

Coco — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 15:28:22 +0000

Thanks for making the first one Jodi! I thought maybe nobody is interested in storey this time. I put Frank here because I like very much the storeys when they mix. Even though Tuck was writing horrible things it was very much fun to write when he was writing to. Its like dual between me and Tuck. I don’t believe he meant it what he was writing. Like it was too much to believe. Maybe you know what I mean yes?

By: Kaylie Jones

Kaylie Jones — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 14:45:59 +0000

I’m still loving this story. I think you’ve drawn a remarkable character. I kind of wish in Round 6 we had more of her conversation with Frank. I’d like to know what she told him. I love this character.

By: Jodi Cleghorn

Jodi Cleghorn — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 13:07:03 +0000

No comments this round Coco?

As always you create beautiful images and combine it with insightfulness:
“Maybe I do this now to create deep spaces inside me. Like deep well you must go down for the sweet and clear water. ”

Any of us who write know the deep space which have been bored out within us, nourishing us and sending us a little crazy.

You’ve also created an interesting juxtaposition my mentioning Frank (which most of us despise in one form or another). If that is what her wish is – to go with him, we know just how desperate Ivana is.