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		<title>By: Rhae</title>
		<link>http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/rhae-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2203</link>
		<dc:creator>Rhae</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Sep 2009 19:09:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The only reason you accuse me of standing on a soapbox and not Tuck is because you share the same foot space as him. As for confessions, you&#039;re better off taking them to the priest, where they belong.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The only reason you accuse me of standing on a soapbox and not Tuck is because you share the same foot space as him. As for confessions, you&#8217;re better off taking them to the priest, where they belong.</p>
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		<title>By: Rhae</title>
		<link>http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/rhae-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2202</link>
		<dc:creator>Rhae</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Sep 2009 19:04:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fair enough, Dan. I haven&#039;t decided yet myself if Melanie is the main character. As you&#039;ve surmised my interest is more in non-fiction than in the anthropocentric - or should I say charactercentric - realm of fiction.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fair enough, Dan. I haven&#8217;t decided yet myself if Melanie is the main character. As you&#8217;ve surmised my interest is more in non-fiction than in the anthropocentric &#8211; or should I say charactercentric &#8211; realm of fiction.</p>
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		<title>By: danpowell</title>
		<link>http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/rhae-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2195</link>
		<dc:creator>danpowell</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Sep 2009 14:07:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Melanie is the main character? I think the whole preamble and the focus on telling not showing is what has kept me from engaging with her. Perhaps it is just a style thing and I am simply not getting this. The ideas are interesting though so you still have me as a reader at the moment. I think I&#039;ll give your past stuff another blast through to see if that changes my view.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Melanie is the main character? I think the whole preamble and the focus on telling not showing is what has kept me from engaging with her. Perhaps it is just a style thing and I am simply not getting this. The ideas are interesting though so you still have me as a reader at the moment. I think I&#8217;ll give your past stuff another blast through to see if that changes my view.</p>
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		<title>By: Auggie</title>
		<link>http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/rhae-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2171</link>
		<dc:creator>Auggie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Sep 2009 04:57:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>you&#039;re making this contest your soap box. that&#039;s fine, but what the hell is this story about?  sight for the poor?  i confess.  i voted for you this time.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>you&#8217;re making this contest your soap box. that&#8217;s fine, but what the hell is this story about?  sight for the poor?  i confess.  i voted for you this time.</p>
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		<title>By: Rhae</title>
		<link>http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/rhae-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2142</link>
		<dc:creator>Rhae</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 14:54:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, you&#039;ve mentioned it several times. Melanie must be flat for your taste in fiction. You want more emotion to come through. That&#039;s why you don&#039;t care about her. That&#039;s okay. So long as you care about the ideas, that&#039;s enough.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, you&#8217;ve mentioned it several times. Melanie must be flat for your taste in fiction. You want more emotion to come through. That&#8217;s why you don&#8217;t care about her. That&#8217;s okay. So long as you care about the ideas, that&#8217;s enough.</p>
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		<title>By: danpowell</title>
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		<dc:creator>danpowell</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 07:59:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Still liking the ideas in here, but still not sure who I am supposed to be caring about. I know I have said it before, we need a character clearly marked as through which the reader will experience the world of the novel. I would say you are safe for another week, though as you say, nothing is certain, but if the field we smaller I would be less sure of this.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Still liking the ideas in here, but still not sure who I am supposed to be caring about. I know I have said it before, we need a character clearly marked as through which the reader will experience the world of the novel. I would say you are safe for another week, though as you say, nothing is certain, but if the field we smaller I would be less sure of this.</p>
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		<title>By: Rhae</title>
		<link>http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/rhae-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1999</link>
		<dc:creator>Rhae</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Sep 2009 17:24:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>If the previous rounds have taught me anything it is that no one can ever be assured of anything. Regardless of how far I make it through the rounds, what is more important to me is that the story, and the ideas driving it, resonate with the readers. I am pleased that this seems to be the case with the three of you. 

Jodi, Medicare is a form of government-run social insurance here in the United States primarily for seniors over 65. Medicare and Medicaid--which provides for minimal health care to a limited number of low-income individuals--constitute our government&#039;s meager total commitment to the health of its populace. It is scandalous that a country as wealthy as ours does not offer free health care to all of its citizens in the same way that it offers a free police force and free schools. The United States ranked 29th globally in infant mortality in 2004, the latest year such data were available for all countries (October 2008 data brief from the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention National Center for Health Statistics). Ironically, despite offering so little, the US outspends any country in the world on healthcare, second only to Canada. It has the rare honor of having the most expensive and one of the most inefficient health care systems in the world. 

A large sector of the public here in the US would prefer a Canadian-style health care system, but in fact the Australian system is far superior. Few people here know about it. Most of the public gets their news from the corporate media and the kind of rabid rightwing talk shows that Frank surely listens to. This propaganda explains why some of the poorest people in this country humiliate themselves at town hall meetings by campaigning against their best interests and, unbeknownst to them, on behalf of giant insurance providers in trying to stop Obama&#039;s health plan (which to be clear offers only an improved version of the inefficient, wasteful, privatized insurance system now in place). If the facts were ever presented to the public, Americans would overwhelmingly demand a single-payer health care plan. But they&#039;re never going to get those facts from the major TV outlets or newspapers. The efficient US propaganda system, which gives the illusion of free, lively debate, ensures the public stays in the dark. As Noam Chomsky said, when the state loses the capacity to control people by force, it must find another way to keep the unruly masses in check: mind-control. What violence is to totalitarian states, propaganda is to democracies.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If the previous rounds have taught me anything it is that no one can ever be assured of anything. Regardless of how far I make it through the rounds, what is more important to me is that the story, and the ideas driving it, resonate with the readers. I am pleased that this seems to be the case with the three of you. </p>
<p>Jodi, Medicare is a form of government-run social insurance here in the United States primarily for seniors over 65. Medicare and Medicaid&#8211;which provides for minimal health care to a limited number of low-income individuals&#8211;constitute our government&#8217;s meager total commitment to the health of its populace. It is scandalous that a country as wealthy as ours does not offer free health care to all of its citizens in the same way that it offers a free police force and free schools. The United States ranked 29th globally in infant mortality in 2004, the latest year such data were available for all countries (October 2008 data brief from the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention National Center for Health Statistics). Ironically, despite offering so little, the US outspends any country in the world on healthcare, second only to Canada. It has the rare honor of having the most expensive and one of the most inefficient health care systems in the world. </p>
<p>A large sector of the public here in the US would prefer a Canadian-style health care system, but in fact the Australian system is far superior. Few people here know about it. Most of the public gets their news from the corporate media and the kind of rabid rightwing talk shows that Frank surely listens to. This propaganda explains why some of the poorest people in this country humiliate themselves at town hall meetings by campaigning against their best interests and, unbeknownst to them, on behalf of giant insurance providers in trying to stop Obama&#8217;s health plan (which to be clear offers only an improved version of the inefficient, wasteful, privatized insurance system now in place). If the facts were ever presented to the public, Americans would overwhelmingly demand a single-payer health care plan. But they&#8217;re never going to get those facts from the major TV outlets or newspapers. The efficient US propaganda system, which gives the illusion of free, lively debate, ensures the public stays in the dark. As Noam Chomsky said, when the state loses the capacity to control people by force, it must find another way to keep the unruly masses in check: mind-control. What violence is to totalitarian states, propaganda is to democracies.</p>
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		<title>By: Jodi Cleghorn</title>
		<link>http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/rhae-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1993</link>
		<dc:creator>Jodi Cleghorn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Sep 2009 14:42:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I haven&#039;t been able to get the image of the &quot;niqab&quot; out of my head since I read it - which means you&#039;re winning at planting images and having them retained.

I&#039;m intrigued at your mention of &quot;medicare&quot; given that is the name of our universal health care system here in Australia.

I&#039;m glad to see Melanie here again and being able to have her deep needs juxtaposed against cultural &quot;trends&quot; such as the hollographic relationships.

Weaving is a VERY interesting choice of past times, given it has ancient roots.  Like JD I think you can be assured of a place in Round 6.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I haven&#8217;t been able to get the image of the &#8220;niqab&#8221; out of my head since I read it &#8211; which means you&#8217;re winning at planting images and having them retained.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m intrigued at your mention of &#8220;medicare&#8221; given that is the name of our universal health care system here in Australia.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m glad to see Melanie here again and being able to have her deep needs juxtaposed against cultural &#8220;trends&#8221; such as the hollographic relationships.</p>
<p>Weaving is a VERY interesting choice of past times, given it has ancient roots.  Like JD I think you can be assured of a place in Round 6.</p>
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		<title>By: JDEvolutionist</title>
		<link>http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/rhae-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1959</link>
		<dc:creator>JDEvolutionist</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Sep 2009 12:03:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A clever use of the image, very subtle. Lots of intriguing possibilities building up and I like the balance between an evolving future, the rise of dominant power bases and the remaining human desire for &quot;real-person&quot; communication, something that always remained deep seated in our psychological development.

Your place in the next round must be secured.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A clever use of the image, very subtle. Lots of intriguing possibilities building up and I like the balance between an evolving future, the rise of dominant power bases and the remaining human desire for &#8220;real-person&#8221; communication, something that always remained deep seated in our psychological development.</p>
<p>Your place in the next round must be secured.</p>
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		<title>By: annasbones</title>
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		<dc:creator>annasbones</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Sep 2009 11:00:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Another masterpiece.
Keep on weaving Rhae. You&#039;re in my top 3 favorite fourth fiction writers.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another masterpiece.<br />
Keep on weaving Rhae. You&#8217;re in my top 3 favorite fourth fiction writers.</p>
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