Comments on: OMAR 6

By: Eros

Eros — Sun, 04 Oct 2009 00:49:32 +0000

Littlestar, I don’t hate Omar or his work. I think he is a genius without focus. I got frustrated with him for a minute because I was drunk. Internet plus alcohol equals bad idea. Love, Eros

By: Joan Begs

Joan Begs — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 09:43:14 +0000

Omar you are fantastic! Keep going, you are my favourite! Don’t worry about the critics, some are just jealousy because. Rhymes are difficult to express and that is an art of saying but difficult. Thanks for your courage and effort!

By: Jodi Cleghorn

Jodi Cleghorn — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 08:30:55 +0000

I’m with you LittleStar (gee we seem to side often?). There is enough doom,gloom and misery in the world. I can look forward to a laugh and a giggle very week knowing Omar is going to bust out the rhyme.

And for those nay-sayers … I’ve never managed to perfect the art of effortless rhyme (I’m not suggesting Omar it is effortless for you to write – though it comes across almost seamless) You have my respect and you wont be getting my vote.

Keep up doing something different and lets hope the conservatives and the highbrow poetry snobs don’t come to gobble you up.

By: littlestar

littlestar — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 07:10:14 +0000

Jeez, guys – what’s with all the Omar hate? What’s not to like about this? Omar’s amazing rhymes make me laugh every week!

By: Eros

Eros — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 06:08:23 +0000

“Eros of the iron fist”
Have you never heard of Tough Love?

“Pretends to wear a velvet glove;”
I have made no profession of any gloves. Even Christ will have a double edged tongue.

“Enough already, find a word
To sign off with than ‘love.’”
Why it’s the Truth. I have written no lie on this show.

“You are no Jesus, nor a Gandhi,”
I have not said I AM. But oh how I wish.

“Sure as hell you’re not the Buddha;”
Maybe in a little time though, one must always hope.

“Time to drop the lovey dovey;”
Not on my life.

“Embrace your inner barracuda.”
I embrace only the inner Light. But pain and alcohol make for a beastly filter.

I am sorry I hurt your heart, but not everything that got said. You shouldn’t have gotten my vote this round because you nailed the challenge, I mistook your cleverness for bitching again. Next round you will get my immunity, no matter what I think, to make up for this misconception.

Love, Eros

By: Omar

Omar — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 03:02:47 +0000

Eros of the iron fist
Pretends to wear a velvet glove;
Enough already, find a word
To sign off with than “love.”
You are no Jesus, nor a Gandhi,
Sure as hell you’re not the Buddha;
Time to drop the lovey dovey;
Embrace your inner barracuda.

By: JDEvolutionist

JDEvolutionist — Fri, 02 Oct 2009 21:01:11 +0000

Omar you are a pain! I voted you out last time. Maybe it depends what time of day it is when you are read. Somehow I’m back to liking this for all its drivel! Memories of Fido here. I just don’t know – back to thinking again, your up against some much more conventional competition even if it is just as full of shit in many respects! We’ll see.

By: Eros

Eros — Fri, 02 Oct 2009 08:05:10 +0000

Ps. Oh sorry I forgot that I voted for someone else Round 3.

By: Eros

Eros — Fri, 02 Oct 2009 07:26:42 +0000

Omar I am very surprised that people have fallen for this dribble pass round two. The ability to rhyme is the only thing that has saved your butt, because it sure as hell is not your story. There has been no movement in it for a few rounds now. You spend more time bitching about the challenges then telling your story. Had you not wasted your time I could have looked pass you retelling a story that has been retold a million times and you wouldn’t have been getting my vote every round. If you do make it into the next round I hope you start moving forward. Love, Eros

By: annasbones

annasbones — Thu, 01 Oct 2009 09:48:02 +0000

haha, my kind of poetry keep on rolling Omar.