Comments on: OMAR 5 http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/omar-5/ By Constantine Markides. Essays, Journalism, Fiction, Photography, Video, Reality Shows, and other etceteras. Thu, 15 Jul 2010 21:03:57 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Omar http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/omar-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2216 Omar Thu, 24 Sep 2009 05:19:46 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=2917#comment-2216 You’re right Dan Powell and JD Ev, This tale is in a bog; It's sad but true, I'm at a loss; I'm drinking lots of grog. So prithee, if you have advice On where my rhymes should go, Do share the news, I will make sure You get your quid pro quo. You’re right Dan Powell and JD Ev,
This tale is in a bog;
It’s sad but true, I’m at a loss;
I’m drinking lots of grog.
So prithee, if you have advice
On where my rhymes should go,
Do share the news, I will make sure
You get your quid pro quo.

]]> By: danpowell http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/omar-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2130 danpowell Tue, 22 Sep 2009 08:03:34 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=2917#comment-2130 I'm with JD, more story is needed now. I am still liking the form, but definitely need to get stuck in to the story now. I’m with JD, more story is needed now. I am still liking the form, but definitely need to get stuck in to the story now.

]]> By: tetra http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/omar-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2037 tetra Mon, 21 Sep 2009 17:59:10 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=2917#comment-2037 as ever some great stuff mixed in with some less polished lines. nicely balanced telling of the story and digressing as ever some great stuff mixed in with some less polished lines. nicely balanced telling of the story and digressing

]]> By: JDEvolutionist http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/omar-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1996 JDEvolutionist Sun, 20 Sep 2009 15:01:51 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=2917#comment-1996 Sorry Omah but I'm not as impressed as Anna and Jodi - its been an interesting approach but I feel that you have failed to create that feeling of 'wanting to know what's about to happen' and the approach in terms of Novella is losing its appeal. Not read all round 5 entries yet but your close to a vote from me! But it is at least round 5. Sorry Omah but I’m not as impressed as Anna and Jodi – its been an interesting approach but I feel that you have failed to create that feeling of ‘wanting to know what’s about to happen’ and the approach in terms of Novella is losing its appeal.

Not read all round 5 entries yet but your close to a vote from me! But it is at least round 5.

]]> By: Jodi Cleghorn http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/omar-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1991 Jodi Cleghorn Sun, 20 Sep 2009 14:33:56 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=2917#comment-1991 I don't care what the others say about your poetry not being "high brow" enough. It is entertaining and music to my ears and I look forward, as always, to reading more. I don’t care what the others say about your poetry not being “high brow” enough. It is entertaining and music to my ears and I look forward, as always, to reading more.

]]> By: annasbones http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/omar-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1985 annasbones Sun, 20 Sep 2009 12:06:07 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=2917#comment-1985 Sweet rhymes once again! Sweet rhymes once again!

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