Comments on: NORA 5

By: Vasia

Vasia — Thu, 24 Sep 2009 03:56:27 +0000

No shit?!!!!..and no pun intended….

By: Jodi Cleghorn

Jodi Cleghorn — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 14:04:11 +0000

For the record Auggie, if one may point it out, are you not the namesake of Arthur’s bum chum? Now let’s re-evaluate who’s being shafted and whose being slapped about?

By: Nora

Nora — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 11:43:41 +0000

Auggie, I hope you packed your Maxi Pads.

By: Auggie

Auggie — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 05:15:42 +0000

jodi, we know which slapping you liked. and the rest of you, don’t you recognize this as the housewife porn that it is. nora, are you a desperate housewife? don’t bring to the world of writing what has already ruined cinema. this is pathetic. the guy bangs his girl and then tells her he’s gay. so unoriginal. “rippling bubble spheres”–even if you like this crap, that imagery doesn’t work. i could go on. point is, this sucks and the commenters seem to like it. all of ya’ll go masturbate to your mom’s jc penny catalogues.
and for the record, auggie is a dude.

By: Nora

Nora — Tue, 22 Sep 2009 11:43:59 +0000

I second that, Dan. I can always count on a witty comment from you!

By: danpowell

danpowell — Tue, 22 Sep 2009 08:47:30 +0000

The climax of the scene is much more shocking than the climax in the scene. Great ending that surely must secure your place in the next round.

By: Tony

Tony — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 20:15:59 +0000

WOW, and just as i was thinking ‘what, no anal?’ then ZING!!!!

By: Nora

Nora — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 19:47:15 +0000

Tetra, before you start hurling more accusations and snide remarks, please consider whether the “he” was a grammatical error by the narrator or by one of the characters. Next time, please level your critiques at the right party, namely Arthur, who considering the circumstances cannot be expected to get his pronouns correct. Having said that, I appreciate that you confessed to enjoying the scene.

By: tetra

tetra — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 19:39:29 +0000

Way to go. bring it on Nora. You remind me of the aristocrat who won a reality Tv show – Big Brother – in the UK. He learned how to walk the walk and talk the talk by just being, well, his lovely self.

By: Nora

Nora — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 18:17:41 +0000

Why thank you. Fourth Fiction is teaching me how to write the cliffhanger conclusion. And goodness aren’t there an awful lot of cliffs! In this medium, it is not the first sentence that is the most important but rather the final one.