Comments on: COCO 6 http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/coco-6/ Essays, Journalism, Fiction, Photography, Video, Reality Shows, and other etceteras by Constantine Markides Mon, 06 Feb 2012 00:02:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Coco http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/coco-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2619 Coco Wed, 07 Oct 2009 16:39:03 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=3052#comment-2619 Mashala Host on video! I laughed loud when I read you give me Dostoevski for challenge. Omar!!?? :( Yes I agree with little star! I have not done Internet in too long so I have too much catch up to do. Jodi you must feel so proud. I hope I can some day grow boy like that to. Mashala Host on video! I laughed loud when I read you give me Dostoevski for challenge.

Omar!!?? :( Yes I agree with little star! I have not done Internet in too long so I have too much catch up to do. Jodi you must feel so proud. I hope I can some day grow boy like that to.

]]> By: Coco http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/coco-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2515 Coco Sat, 03 Oct 2009 15:10:27 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=3052#comment-2515 That is too much compliment for me Dan but thank you. This is not good day for me today so it help to read nice words from all of you. That is too much compliment for me Dan but thank you. This is not good day for me today so it help to read nice words from all of you.

]]> By: danpowell http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/coco-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2508 danpowell Sat, 03 Oct 2009 11:05:25 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=3052#comment-2508 Brilliant. You use Frank far better than Tuck ever used your stuff. Jodi is right about your Chernobyl metaphor....great stuff. I think this piece works despite the intrusion of Frank, it fits the tone of your story AND you get to explore how ridiculous Tuck's efforts to derail your story are. This is hands down the best novella thus far. The others need to step things up to match the pace, character and language here. Brilliant. You use Frank far better than Tuck ever used your stuff. Jodi is right about your Chernobyl metaphor….great stuff.

I think this piece works despite the intrusion of Frank, it fits the tone of your story AND you get to explore how ridiculous Tuck’s efforts to derail your story are.

This is hands down the best novella thus far. The others need to step things up to match the pace, character and language here.

]]> By: Jodi Cleghorn http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/coco-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2499 Jodi Cleghorn Sat, 03 Oct 2009 08:36:44 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=3052#comment-2499 *round of applause* .... at least you didn't stoop to naming Tuck as the character. My favourite lines: "ody can replace itself and forget. But mind does not replace. Mind only buries memory and memories make radiation like Chornobyl. Even when it’s over its not." I know Dan commmented a few rounds ago on your the carnivale horses. You're in for the long haul Coco ... so let's see where Ivana takes us next. *round of applause* …. at least you didn’t stoop to naming Tuck as the character.

My favourite lines: “ody can replace itself and forget. But mind does not replace. Mind only buries memory and memories make radiation like Chornobyl. Even when it’s over its not.” I know Dan commmented a few rounds ago on your the carnivale horses.

You’re in for the long haul Coco … so let’s see where Ivana takes us next.

]]> By: littlestar http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/coco-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2496 littlestar Sat, 03 Oct 2009 07:27:11 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=3052#comment-2496 HA! Brilliant response! Coco: 1. Tuck: 0. Actually, more like Tuck: -20. HA! Brilliant response!

Coco: 1. Tuck: 0.

Actually, more like Tuck: -20.

]]> By: JDEvolutionist http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/coco-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2479 JDEvolutionist Fri, 02 Oct 2009 20:22:21 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=3052#comment-2479 Pity you took up the 'Frank' line Coco, I think it has somewhat detracted from your tale. Not your best effort but still has potential over all, think you will see at least one more round. Pity you took up the ‘Frank’ line Coco, I think it has somewhat detracted from your tale. Not your best effort but still has potential over all, think you will see at least one more round.

]]> By: Coco http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/coco-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2472 Coco Fri, 02 Oct 2009 08:19:11 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=3052#comment-2472 Tuck since you lost your job now maybe you are the one who should be the secrataraty.. Tuck since you lost your job now maybe you are the one who should be the secrataraty..

]]> By: Eros http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/coco-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2465 Eros Fri, 02 Oct 2009 06:54:20 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=3052#comment-2465 Coco, I had the same thoughts about Frank being a schoolboy. Brava! :) I also like that you have started to move back to your story, keep up the good work. Love, Eros Coco, I had the same thoughts about Frank being a schoolboy. Brava! :) I also like that you have started to move back to your story, keep up the good work. Love, Eros

]]> By: annasbones http://www.fourthnight.com/2009/09/coco-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2425 annasbones Wed, 30 Sep 2009 17:01:02 +0000 http://www.fourthnight.com/?p=3052#comment-2425 Looks like Tuck isn't completely out of our lives! ;) Looks like Tuck isn’t completely out of our lives! ;)

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