Comments on: COCO 5

By: Coco

Coco — Fri, 25 Sep 2009 16:48:24 +0000

Yes but I will have to wait long time before it comes to Cyprus cinema though!

So now I have TWO movies I am waiting for! …

By: Constantine Markides

Constantine Markides — Fri, 25 Sep 2009 14:32:56 +0000

“Coco before Fourth Fiction”
http://movies.nytimes.com/2009/09/25/movies/25coco.html?8dpc

By: Coco

Coco — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 08:08:42 +0000

Йопта these comments on website make good humour! I feel I am now in wrestling fight against Tuck and we each have our teams for support. Anyway Tuck you can know I didn’t vote for you. I am ready for your mister frank…

I am also laughing now because I realise when I was making editing changes in writing about Stavro’s position on bathroom floor that I forgot to change the zhopa (his but) with his body so Stavros right now has a zhopa under his belly by accident! haha So maybe that’s his punishment for frodo. To live forever with his ass in front of him.

By: Auggie

Auggie — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 04:53:06 +0000

coco, you’re a sicko.

By: danpowell

danpowell — Tue, 22 Sep 2009 07:53:20 +0000

Another awesome piece Coco. Love the way this builds in tension building to her bursting out onto the street. And you manage to beat Tuck at his own game. Definitely on board for next week. Your ability to draw in the reader is remarkable.

By: Tony

Tony — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 19:56:32 +0000

This is best read with a faux-Cantonese accent

By: tetra

tetra — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 18:22:44 +0000

Tuck is Tucking into your pie. better give that sob some medicine ’cause I dont expect him to feel any compunction in roughing around with your story girl. i feel hes ahead coz hes already ahead of your story and limiting your moves. quite the tactician. better show us what you can do in a tight situation if you both make it through to the next round. whose gonna have the last laugh?

By: Coco

Coco — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 16:05:11 +0000

Its not style its bad English haha. If I could change I would! I love your star picture very much. Same colours of Ukraine flag

After last writing Tuck did I’m looking forward to next round to! Tuck dont forget what Jodi said… That you are messing with wrong woman! Although who knows. Maybe right woman. Maybe Frank need some one like Ivana to put him in his place!

By: littlestar

littlestar — Sun, 20 Sep 2009 08:07:12 +0000

Coco – I didn’t know what to think when I first started reading your novella. At first, I was really put off by your writing style.

But now, I’m hooked and find myself looking forward to the next round…

By: Coco

Coco — Sat, 19 Sep 2009 14:28:41 +0000

hmm Kaylie I thought I am giving already Ivana’s inner world maybe even too much by showing how she react to outside world in her thinking.
JD Yes I am waiting to read what Tuck will write! Ivana can handle him him. She has seen it all! Whats wrong with autobiographical? Novelas can be autobiographic yes?
Writing is very good this round so far. Vote can go anywhere.