Comments on: COCO 4

By: Coco

Coco — Tue, 15 Sep 2009 08:41:01 +0000

Спасиьа! Yes to post early is good idea Jodi but I am not worried even if Frank writes first. I will wait like cat waits for bird to land near bye. It can come to me…

There is darkness in video this round. But I like challenge this time. There is strong suffering look in man’s face.

Bye by Igor

By: Kaylie Jones

Kaylie Jones — Mon, 14 Sep 2009 19:23:18 +0000

Otchen khorosho!! I’m loving this story because it’s a real story, with a fascinating character. I hope you keep it up.

By: Jodi Cleghorn

Jodi Cleghorn — Sun, 13 Sep 2009 12:07:31 +0000

Go Coco – both for another outstanding piece of writing but also the chihuaha (and I can’t spell it either) comment about Tony.

I love the insights Ivana brings and while I liked the image of the Carnial horse – I thought the more startling reflection was of the cabaret women who no longer try to separate their lives. And perhaps because Ivana can see this – there is hope she wont stay around long enough.

Yes – Tuck is a thieving SOB but I am with however mentioned earlier – that perhaps it’s a backhanded gift. I’d love to see Ivana face off with Frank. I know who would win that one. And if you got in first and posted … Tuck woudl just have to eat it!

By: Coco

Coco — Sun, 13 Sep 2009 08:29:09 +0000

Thats okay for me Tony because reading you is like hearing chiwuawa who need to bark and growl at every one around to feel good because he is so small. But anyway you are funny at least. Man with mean humour is better than man with no humour.

By: craig

craig — Fri, 11 Sep 2009 19:11:12 +0000

what is with everyone writing about cyprus? and like dipping their toes in sexytime?

By: Eros

Eros — Fri, 11 Sep 2009 18:05:40 +0000

Coco, whether Tuck meant to or not, he has given you a gift here. If you do decide to go with Tuck’s interaction with your story then it gives you a way to get away from the darkness of Fyor’s story and gives you a chance to tell about how the police don’t help with the problem of human exploitation. Otherwise just ignore what he did in his story and keep going like nothing changed in yours. Love, Eros

By: Tony

Tony — Fri, 11 Sep 2009 17:58:30 +0000

what, are you challenging yourself to write without using a single comma? its like trying to read what a robot is thinking

By: Coco

Coco — Thu, 10 Sep 2009 15:43:47 +0000

Efharisto Dan. Carnival horses always seem to me so sad. Even more because they are supposed to be for having fun.

So Tuck is trying to invade my storey… That’s ok mister, I can play game like that too! Be careful Tuck because maybe Ivana is more than your tough guy Frank can handle

By: danpowell

danpowell — Wed, 09 Sep 2009 09:54:20 +0000

With immunity this week you could have produced a below par piece. Instead you produce another great piece of writing. I like the way she describes herself as a carnival horse. A beautiful, sad and desparate image. Her need to seperate herself from what she is doing makes total sense and you write about that beautifully. Ivana is shaping up into a wonderful character, full of emotion and depth and with a fascinating story to tell. Looking forward to reading next week’s.

By: Coco

Coco — Tue, 08 Sep 2009 15:16:08 +0000

Thanks all of you I’m so happy for the immunity. Maybe you dont think I need it Chris but with Fyor leaving you never know what vote will be. So like host said I will enjoy the free ride. And its because of all of you I got it so double thanks for that.

Sorry to do this here but Go Bondarenko! First Ukrainian to make it so far in major tennis tournament!