Comments on: TUCK 1

By: Jodi Cleghorn

Jodi Cleghorn — Thu, 13 Aug 2009 23:24:15 +0000

As I’m not terminally attached to my TV I’ve got no idea how a “24″ satire would look like or how it would pan out.

I like the fact Tuck you have set up an interesting conflict within the first sentence. You leave the reader asking …what next? …will he? I’ll continue reading.

By: Tuck

Tuck — Thu, 13 Aug 2009 12:54:22 +0000

Dan (or “dan the man” as Fido would say) has rolled his sleeves up. Good on you. I support the no-holds barred style. I’d say you’re right on mark. I’d much rather read how the first woman you saw naked wasn’t your mother. Was it was your grandma? That must have been traumatic.

I’ll tell you who I’m voting off, Annasbones: myself. Because I’m such a dick I just can’t help myself from clicking that Tuck button.

By: Tuck

Tuck — Tue, 11 Aug 2009 12:49:54 +0000

I’m as serios about the plot as you are about spelling. But you can still call me Kiefer (or to be Fourth Fiction friendly, make that QUIF, which sounds about right…)

By: dj

dj — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 06:37:35 +0000

Please tell me this is a 24 hour satire (and you’re not serios about this plot)…