Comments on: OLAF 1

By: Olaf

Olaf — Wed, 12 Aug 2009 21:51:23 +0000

That’s my boy. Now we’re talking.

By: craig

craig — Wed, 12 Aug 2009 13:57:58 +0000

lets hear more about how they came, and then, where they went

By: JDEvolutionist

JDEvolutionist — Wed, 12 Aug 2009 03:35:30 +0000

Guess reality shows are all about speaking your mind. So its got to be done – no I don’t much like where it seems to be going, I’m looking for something more inspiring, tantalising.

By: Natalia

Natalia — Tue, 11 Aug 2009 20:59:06 +0000

I guess what I am saying is that the originality of this depends on the follow up. It isn’t the idea of romance, or of one unforgettable woman that is cliched, its the way it was written. But I am really not trying to offend.

By: Olaf

Olaf — Tue, 11 Aug 2009 20:20:53 +0000

Either I belong to a dinosaur generation or you women nowadays have lost all sense of romance. With that attitude, what’s the point? As for my surly bastard side, (assuming you’re out there reading this, Dan) you can goddam count on seeing it soon. Without a temper I’d be just another washed out sunovabitch.

By: Natalia

Natalia — Tue, 11 Aug 2009 13:05:31 +0000

Olaf, your reply to Anna was more inspired than your opening.
Anna, I totally agree, wasn’t this already a movie starring Jerry O’Connell? Or wait, was it Matthew McConaughey?

By: Olaf

Olaf — Sun, 09 Aug 2009 21:22:40 +0000

Christ, those are some jaded words from a pretty lass like yourself, annasbones. I reckon either you’re frustrated because you’re not the one or you haven’t met the right guy yet. Maybe try changing your cocktail of choice. What do you expect when you’re drinking bloody marys at night?

By: Kuyerjudd

Kuyerjudd — Sun, 09 Aug 2009 15:11:47 +0000

I’m no Punctuation Police or anything, but I feel like the line could’ve come off better if you’d used em dashes instead of commas, unless, of course, if you’d purposefully meant it as an interjection rather than an abrupt change in the sentence. That, or the novella your line is leading up to isn’t saliently comedic. But eitherway, you’ve hooked me on.

Good job!

By: annasbones

annasbones — Fri, 07 Aug 2009 17:58:39 +0000

Oh great, the truly original novel plot: boy meets girl, boy dumps girl, boy realizes this was a mistake and that he has now lost his (*ahem*) ‘one true love’, boy cant’ quite find anyone to match up to high standards set by above-mentioned ‘one true love’, boy f***ks everything that moves to alleviate the heartache (thereby screwing up a whole slew of women forever as byproduct), all the while dreaming of getting reunited with his one love goddess.

Too bad, I liked your tweets, but good thing you don’t have immunity.