Round 1: Write the opening sentence of your novella
The old man payed Yiannis 300 euros which is how much it costs for two of us for whole night at 150 each (its more cheaper during day – 60 for sex one time and 80 for twice) and then drove us to a village house outside Limassol which didn’t have even air conditioning so by the time we go to bedroom he was dripping and we could see all the black curly hairs on his back squashed under his sweaty white underwear shirt.
5 Comments To "COCO 1"
#1 Comment By dj On August 10, 2009 @ 2:44 am
no commas! great!
#2 Comment By Coco On August 10, 2009 @ 11:21 am
Really dj i didn’t put commas?… oops your right! I mean “Yes. Of course no commas. That was deliberate!” … hahaha … Sorry its my english. Too bad I can’t write in russian! 😉
oh and HOST, i spelt word WHOLE wrong but for some reason not allowed to edit. can you change hole to whole?
#3 Comment By Constantine Markides On August 10, 2009 @ 8:58 pm
Ok, I changed “hole” to “whole” as you requested, Coco.
#4 Comment By craig On August 12, 2009 @ 9:01 am
grammar and spelling be damned, this is about sex!
#5 Comment By Coco On August 12, 2009 @ 11:15 am
haha certain kind of sex yes 🙁