The Chain Story
UTAH: As they were marched deeper into the cave, Willow whispered into the girl’s ear, “My life wasn’t nearly as exciting before I met you.”7:46 PM Jul 26th from webOMAR: Willow thought the girl was too scared to respond. Actually she was singing “Rhymin & Stealin” to herself. That’s why she was shaking.9:13 PM Jul 26th from TwitterFonRHAE: They stood before Ali Baba. He was in suit and tie, signing papers at his luxury desk. He looked up. “Interested in a subprime loan?”10:37 PM Jul 26th from webTUCK: “Willow, eh? That wasn’t too nice of your parents now, was it?” He stood up, unzipped, and pulled his dong out. “Willow, meet Willy.”10:59 PM Jul 26th from webCOCO: Willow knows she cant fight man now. She kneels and begins suck. At least girl cant see this, she thinks. Then she bites it off.4:55 AM Jul 27th from webIGOR: Guttural revenge-cries trailed them as they ran. A dead end. Bats flitted. Willow wept. The girl calm. “Open Sesame”, she commanded.9:49 AM Jul 27th from webOLAF: But she forgot to say Close Sesame. The robbers soon caught up to them. Ali Baba hobbled up to Willow. His midsection was bandaged.12:11 PM Jul 27th from webISIS: “Forgive me, Willow,” he wept. The ice shackling her heart melted as they embraced, filled with Universal Love. “Marry me,” he pleaded1:43 PM Jul 27th from webOMAR: Next day they married. Thx to Ali’s generous corporate health package the severed penis was reattached. With coaxing, it even worked.2:42 PM Jul 27th from TwitterFonFIDO: so ali baba babbit, weeping willow and blind willy mcgirl scored a hamptons mansion with the insurance money. neighbors rarely said hi6:02 PM Jul 27th from UberTwitterNORA: THE END. Story 2: Alfred and Catherine lived a quiet untroubled life. But when their country came under attack everything changed.8:44 PM Jul 27th from TweetDeck
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The idea is good but the implementation is too superficial. Maybe I’m a generation or so too late (I’m 61) but rape, cock sucking and dope are all a bit boring. Not that I could do any better but I think the contestants should aim for something that is creative, ‘novel’ and inspiring. It all needs to evolve a bit – recognising, of course, the evolutionary significance of the mind, and its potential for error, on the course that the evolution takes. Keep it up there is potential.
“Rape, cock sucking and dope are all a bit boring.” That would make an interesting blog tagline… We’ll have to see what happens when they actually start their individual novellas. I’ve actually never come across a successful chain story. I just wanted to try it out to see what would happen. I think any evolutionary potential gets sabotaged along the way when you bring a group of people into the mix, especially when they’re participating in something as freakish as a reality show. Thanks for the frank comment.